Notes from the Crit

Option 1: Jumping was overwhelming Darker room would be better Sense of anxiousness Not calming Uncomfortable with self-reflection H...

Option 1:

  • Jumping was overwhelming
  • Darker room would be better
  • Sense of anxiousness
  • Not calming
  • Uncomfortable with self-reflection
  • Harder to connect to
  • Glasses were distracting
  • "I'm like this.  No, I'm like this"
  • Lines were reminiscent of plastic surgery
  • Suggestion to use plastic for overlaying the icosahedron and dodecahedron

Option 2:

  • More meaning
  • Some lined up
  • Eyes open equated more emotion
  • Fade out was appreciated
  • Like the painting was staring out at you
  • Makeup matched and was appreciated
  • The sides still showed up, and would've been better without

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